Music Video Draft

Music Video Draft
Date- 22/11/16







What Went Well:
Editing-
All of the shots are cut to the beat of the music video and all the lip syncing shots are in time with the lyris of the songs.
We have also added in some reverse effects where they are walking togther and also when

 they are bowling.
Camerawork/Shots-
We have come up with some interesting shot types such as when we use the hand held shot of the artists on the swings, shots such as when the couple are in London leaning on the railing the camaera has been postioned in an interesting way instead of just behind them.

Lighting- 
For the ending shots we used a blue lighting with a wave machine to create the effect of the water. We chose to make one side of the artist face darker then the other with the wave machine. 

Even Better If:
Editing-
We could edit some of the shots of beat such as the silhouette ones at the beginning of the music video.
We need to finish a full edit and add in more shots where there are black spaces.
Camerawork/Shots-
Add in more shots of the Robin on her own such as ones of her walking and sitting on her own.
We could add in more close ups of Robin looking sad and lip synicng to make the narrative clearer to our target audience.
Overall-
We need to make it more obvious that the couple are going through a breakup and that she is thinking about their memories. We could do this by adding in more shots of the female artist on her own looking sad.
To make sure we are targeting our specific audience we could change some of the artists clothes to make them more relatable to an Indie pop artistd and their fans. Changing the clothing also means that our artist fits the star persona we are looking for.