Second Draft Of Music Video

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We included more shots of the wave projector to make sure they werent random and made sense in the music video.
We have included new editing techniques such as the overlays when the couple are lip syncing and he dissolve when the male artist faed away so Robin is the only one left.
We have thought about the mise en scene such as when we use the wave projector to link in with the kyrics of the song which are about water. Mise en scene has also been used when Robin is lip syncing in the mirror and there are pictures of her and the male artist around the side of it.

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Some of the shots in the middle of the video need to be in time with the music such as when the couple are walking togther and the shot of the feet walking.
We need to re do some shots to mak sure that it isnt shakey and in foucs or we could add the warp stabiliasation on them in post production. . Such as the shots when Robin is sitting on the grass on her own which need to be stable, the one when the couple are looking out over London.
We need to make sure tha the shots make sense and have been included earlier on in the music video aswell such as the silhouette shots.